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B**5
what a fantastic read this was
honestly at first when I read the description I was like i don't know if this will be good,But I'm so glad I took a chance and read this book it has such an amazing story with some good action moments comedy moments heart warming moments intertwined with every chapter as well as loveable characters strong characters it was like watching a movie. I will definitely be getting the second book. thank you for an amazing story (Simon Archer) FIVE STARS FROM ME.
K**E
Finally
I will be honest I’ve been disappointed with what this author has put out recently but I’m happy to say this feels like it’s finally back in the game. Although it could certainly be seen as a more mellowed down spin off of The Boys, it’s got some metal to it. Characters, though a bit on the 2D side, are well rounded and engaging. Plot is well thought out and world building is well done.Also, I have to give a round of applause to all the little nerd references, such as the YMCA song and a tip of the hat to Mr. Kong’s “The Land” books (yeah, I see what ya did there Mr. Archer ;) )All in all, it was a fun read and I’d be willing to pick up the next one.
K**R
Very good.
I enjoyed the story very much. The sexy moments were there, but obviously not the focus of the book. The only complaint I have is there isn't any real perspective for how Sam's stats increase his abilities; as his strength increases it mentions him picking up heavier things but never really states the difference between 20 strength and 100 strength. Are the invested points diminishing returns or is it a set increase in strength with every point? I might have missed it but does leveling increase all his stats by a small amount or is it strictly quest rewards and him placing experience? Anyways thank you for this great book!
J**S
A good story with good twisted plots
This book is a good read. It has a good a good story line that is easy to follow. Ibwould have like the father not be the villain. I would have had a twin brother to the father who Lost his memory and instead want to kill his relatives unknown that it was his family. Especially when he met his twin brother and how everyone including the hero thought it was the father causing crime wave. Both brothers realize they were having shared memories of each other. The hero having sex with 3 different lovers was hot. I look to reading this author's next book. A good read.
K**R
Good Work; Needs Minor Buffing
Archer is a very prolific writer, and he excels at putting interesting characters in different (harem) settings. In this case, he’s trying out a supes harem story, and it mostly works. There’s a an overall slight discordance to it though, which keeps it from being perfect.Firstly, the MC voice and POV is so young (16-17) that you expect him to be in HS, but he’s not. That doesn’t really come into play until the first bow-chikka bow-wow scene, where it really stands out (heh). I’m not saying that someone (who sounds like they are) sixteen can’t be some harem sex meister [keep that dream alive, boys] but reading it is startling. That happens a few times until you kind of get used to it.Secondly, there are story elements that get overlooked. The “store” is [probably erroneously] mentioned very early but is never investigated. When it reappears, it is briefly checked, but used only once. I don’t know about other gamers, but I’d be checking that sucker out for changes daily, and every time I leveled. The Inventory feature was also vastly under utilized. Got a super secret thumb drive to deliver? Where ya gonna park that baby where no one - and I mean no one - else can get to it? Where you can’t fall or break it? Uh-huh. Where didn’t it go? Right. What else can you put in there? What happens when you do? Yep: we don’t know, and neither does the MC, because he does it only once. Again, I would be stuffing it with all sorts of crap to see how it worked. What stacks? Anything? Does it stay preserved? Hmm?Another item that got missed was the quest for the lost pet failing. He wonders about the penalty for failing a quest late in the book, but I’m pretty sure he did when he fell into the underground rather than retrieve the missing pet. I could be wrong about him Accepting it, but hey. I also want to know what happened to that cat caught in the sewer? Did it get out? Did it die under the rubble, or did a child grab it on the way out? What about the kittens? WON’T SOMEONE PLEASE THINK ABOUT THE KITTENS? Don’t let Sasha know you did that, bro. Just saying.So yeah, overall it’s pretty good, but it feels like it should be a coming-of-age teen kinda-manga supes story (ala “Kid Sensation”) - except for the very detailed harem moments. (Which would cause World Carnage in the KS books. World. Carnage.) It also has a number of places containing inappropriate bought of laughter. Spooky. Don’t make eye contact.For the record I liked it, and I’ll be looking for book two. I’ll also be hoping it’s a bit more clear and focused on what it is, and that it exposes (heh) more about the aspect and how it works. I also wouldn’t mind knowing who’s managing it, and why. (What, you didn’t think there was Something behind the curtain there? Bwa ha ha ha!)
K**R
Fun Read
Your Dad was a super Bullen what's a kid to do become a hero that's what! Drew learns his power of level up by doing good deeds and gains excellent women in his life on the way. The book is well paced with well developed characters. Fun sexual exploits that serve the story flow looking forward to book two! Strongly recommend as a fun read!
A**R
pretty average
The story was a bit cringy and the whole harem aspect doesn’t really make sense with how boring the main character is, but the sex scenes are pretty hot
C**L
Nice
Great author. Has a weird obsession with harems, but makes up for it with awesome plot lines. Needs to write more backyard dungeons though!
K**R
Fun book to read
This had everthing I want in a super hero type of book. Some love,bad guys and adversity. I thought the level up system work well and not to bloated with stats. I am waiting for number 2.
L**.
I expected something and got it.
I came to search for fantasy litrpg's and found it + Superheroes. Sure, it's got clichés, but in this day and age it's basically impossible, to avoid those completely, while committing to a theme like Superheroes. So I expected this and was entertained just fine.
K**R
Bazzinga amazing
Holy crap on a cracker dude you've done it again Absofuckinglutley knocked it outta the park I loved every page of this book and am already hooked and seriously can't wait for the next instalment I hope there are many more to come awesome job Simon many many many many thanks for feeding my voracious overactive imagination 😁😁😁😁😁
W**K
A great read
I enjoyed the first book and will be buying the next in the series as it becomes available for purchase. I recommend the book to all who are interested in this genre. Keep up the good work Simon and go hard on the next book
A**R
fun, cheesy, predictable, and exactly what I was expecting
A quick and fun intro to a series about a late bloomer with a power that can become overpowered. It was exactly what I expected and was awesome. The only weak point were the love interests. It felt artificial and cliche and didn’t really work. But it all worked out well regardless. Will be reading the next one
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